My favourite
poem is “Please Hold” by Ciaran O’Driscoll. I think it is such an accurate
representation of society and how we are expected to behave. I also admire the
sheer bluntness of the speaker, he adopted a robotic tone to mimic how society
has become enslaved by technology and yet he has his own voice, his own
thoughts and opinions. I’m always on my phone or my laptop so the poem made me
think about how often I actually need to be doing this and how much technology
has changed my life. I find that the
humorous tone and sarcasm make the poem more relatable, especially because I’m
sarcastic for a majority of the time. Also, the ending of the poem made me
empathise with the speaker, he is seriously concerned by how technology is
taking over our lives and even though he tried to fight it, even he was
tragically affected by technology. It was inevitable.
I do agree with your comments and with the fact that is an accurate representation of society. However, I'd be interested to know your thoughts and feelings on the 'wife' and how she adds to the poetic voice.
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